Elements of Life (p.2)

Fiction Nov 12, 2022



A Letter From Loneliness (Letter poem)

Dear my friend

You may try to avoid me

You may be scared of my presence

That seems to discourage your enthusiasm all the times

And makes you sorrowful and depressed

But, have you ever thought?

I am the only one, the only companion with you when no one’s here

To comfort you with silence and tranquility.

No, you cannot understand

You can’t never know my true self.

Who would you turn to when your friends isolate you?

Who would be there for you to pour out your restrained feelings and emotions without ever arguing against you?

Who it would be?

Who it would be?

I know I am not human’s favorite like Happiness or Fortune

I am just a murky shadow that waits for the chance to stand by you when you’re lost.

Because I comprehend you, I never attempt to cause conflicts inside you and just simply let you free with your internal thoughts.

Sometimes, I myself feel alone, cold and surrounded by darkness.

Then I silently let my teardrops pour down.

No one sees, no one knows, no one understands

That scary cold catches me, seizing me until I blends myself into nothingness.

That’s sad, isn’t it?


A Letter From War (Letter Poem)

Dear Human,

To begin with, I am War

The one that you think only brings about pain and death

The one that creates chaos and disturbs priceless Peace.

But, remember this

You choose me; I never choose you

Who would prefer a monster like me?

Who would live their days in misery?

Because of your beast-like nature, you create this entity

To show your power, to dominate the inferior to their pleas

A ha! Wanting to fight back

For my stupid claim

Come here, come and beat me if you can

Oh, no, you only make me stronger

From feeding me with your anger.

You, human, are nothing different from me

You’re senseless, harsh, and brutal

Always desiring for power.

Everyday, you bring me back from death and inflict pains upon your species

Never a day passing by without ever a complete peacefulness.

Gun, bomb, rocket, poison you create

To make sure you’ll be able to determine others’ fate.

Sometimes I think you should let me retire

For I am tired of being complained that I am the one to cause casualties and shower the world with blood and destruction.

But you keep calling me. Yay..., exhausted, you know

I am well aware that I am important in your life as without me, you would never flourish and be able to prove yourself

You would never make progress for I am the key.

Conflict, conflict, conflict, they should help you, human, right?

My quick reminder is almost done

I should come back to work now

Somewhere in Middle East, bombing I can sense

People are crying, screaming; they’re so annoying

Running for life or death may dance with you tonight, you, the inferior!

If you want to survive, fight back, why not?

It’s still better than being victims of those “virtuous” people

Who give you bombs to please your traumas

Who are willing to kill you to ease your pain

I think it’s a smart strategy to kill humans for the sake of humans

I should leave by now. They’re calling me.

See you soon!


I used to be your love (I used to...but now Poem)

I used to be your love

Used to think of no one else but you

Used to drink the memories we went through

Used to use my heart to melt your blue

Just like the way your old self could do

But, something had changed

You used to brighten my day with that vivacious face

Yet cold dominated it and seared with a depressing gray

You used to be here with me at this cozy shore

Yet no, our togetherness did not remain anymore

I used to ponder what jealousy was for

Until he appeared and closed our loving door.





Math Is Life (Free verse)

What if the world existed without Mathematics?

What if humans live on without Calculations?

Addition, Subtraction, Multiplication, Division

All descend into the realm of nothingness.

Transactions would not be completed;

Sellers would go bankruptcy;

Businessmen would be out of employment,

For prices would not be determined,

For economic strategies would be impossible.

People would wonder how to make ends meet

How to make plans, how to deal with their problems.

Chemistry, Physics, Biology all come to an end

Being blocked among unsolved equations.

Literature would be a queen without king.

Societies all’d become deteriorating,

No advancement would be made,

Human would return to primeval age

Without ever using Derivative and Integration.

Landing on the moon would be a dream;

Diving under vast oceans would be only in imagination.

Life, thus, cannot move on without this important component.


Whitney Houston (Name Poetry)

W is for Wonderful, you’re a creature of God

H is for Heaven where you’ve descended from

I is for Impossible to describe for angelic voice

T is for Talented, you’re as a singer

N is for Natural, your feelings are through your performances

E is for Emotional, we get as listening to your songs

Y is for Yesterday, we feel when you were still here

H is for Harsh, life has treated you badly

O is for Original, your works are to audiences

U is for Unique, your voice is one of a kind

S is for Sacrifice, you have for music industry

T is for Timeless, your songs are in our hearts

O is for Obsessive, we are to hear your sudden death

N is for Need, we feel to have you here.




Rain (Dramatic Monologue)

It is a December rainy day

When human vitality seems to fade away.

Darkness dominates over the gleaming lights.

The whole tiny village is deprived of delight

Fallen leaves smother in the strong gust of wind

Coupled with its chilly, blinding human sight.

The disordered natural tears drop on the rusted roof

Bending legs against my chest, how I feel aloof

Wishing you to be here with me at this time

Though I know well you from afar should be fine.

Six months you’ve left for paying my own debt

Why does money issue is so hard to forget?

I am not sure that future to any extent is secured

To be worthwhile for what you by now have endured

In the biting cold shanty town of cash-rich Tokyo

When your life is nothing different from a domino

Selling for faceless people, you’ve sold your true self

Happiness’ gone, only tiredness and distress I could tell

Through wrinkled letters that seem dampened with tears

Your handwriting is no longer taken by delicate care

Please, turn your head back for you’re suffused with despair

I never want you to breathe that exotic air!

Thach Sanh Ly Thong (Narrative Poetry)

Once upon a time, I was a virtuous alcohol seller

A monster appeared for flesh and blood, scaring every dwellers.

Scholarly mandarins and renowned soldiers tried, yet futile

Having to offer an adult every month for the brutal

Whoever can kill it, half of the country would be the reward.

One day, Thach Sanh I saw out of the forest, couldn’t be ignored.

Healthily he answered , “I’m alone. My parents, both are gone.”

Pitiful as I was, giving a generous suggestion,

“Come to my house to work and your loneliness would be lessened”

From there, my business had flourished partly with his diligence.

Unluckily, one day, I was the chosen adult for the beast.

I felt faint, restrained for my business would be incomplete

Without my diplomatic skills and gifted persuasiveness.

My mom will depress; her emotional pain will never end.

No blood relationship made my brother a victim so perfect.

Kindly accepting, he went for the gloomy lair of the monster

In a starless night while I tormented myself and pondered

How cruel I was for deceiving my innocent brother.

However, the unexpected spirit came back the next day

With his marvellous victory, bringing the orgress’s head he slayed.

Jealousy arose but I didn’t oppose and had to treat him

A party for his glory and an end to my lucky friend.

The glistening silver glass of wine shall bring someone to death.

Yet my mother called for help. This time I was poisoned instead.

Choking, falling, I, as a shadow, would bring this living soul dread!



My Present (Narrative Poetry)

Struggling as he was to fight against the dreary cancer

In the dimly lit room where death was only the answer.

I wondered whether the Saving God’s glory would be here

Taking away his endless sleep and my haunting fear.

Strangely, vitality came back; Gus returned from the death

Joyfulness we shared; marriage was possible at length

Sometimes, I recalled the world’s not a wish-granting victory

Enjoy I should though well-aware life is very trickery.

The important day came; our hearts were together framed

The unbreakable vow was claimed. How I felt inflamed

Melted by his enchanting eyes and choked by his charming kiss

Wishing this moment could last forever of the greatest bliss.

Yet, trauma fell, impelled me to the weakest version of strength

The colourless flowers seem dying to celebrate my end

With the gray floating clouds darkening my open door

Wake up, Gus, stay with me until I breathe no more!

His gaze locking mine, he knew words were no longer useful

His tears met mine; the shadow of oblivion seemed so cruel.

“Hold our little infinity in your heart till the end of time”

His face appeared murky when I gave the last breath of mine.



Those Winter Sundays

BY ROBERT HAYDEN

Sundays too my father got up early

and put his clothes on in the blueblack cold,

then with cracked hands that ached

from labor in the weekday weather made

banked fires blaze. No one ever thanked him.

I’d wake and hear the cold splintering, breaking.

When the rooms were warm, he’d call,

and slowly I would rise and dress,

fearing the chronic angers of that house,

Speaking indifferently to him,

who had driven out the cold

and polished my good shoes as well.

What did I know, what did I know

of love’s austere and lonely offices?

Comment: Sadness and sorrow are what this poem brought to me. The child in the story, now as a man, regrets having been indifferent to his father who, he used to think, was cold and did not care for his child. However, only until the father gave his last breath, the child realized that the one who showed coldness and indifference was him, not his loving father who actually struggled to work for the child’s future. This plot, along with the nostalgic tone, was so moving and heart-touching and just like me and other people, the boy regret for having done something. This characteristic is inherently instilled in human mind as their very nature and is vividly depicted in the poem, making a big impression in my mind.

Source: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/46461/those-winter-sundays














‘Out, Out—’

BY ROBERT FROST

The buzz saw snarled and rattled in the yard

And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of wood,

Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it.

And from there those that lifted eyes could count

Five mountain ranges one behind the other 5

Under the sunset far into Vermont.

And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled,

As it ran light, or had to bear a load.

And nothing happened: day was all but done.

Call it a day, I wish they might have said 10

To please the boy by giving him the half hour

That a boy counts so much when saved from work.

His sister stood beside him in her apron

To tell them ‘Supper.’ At the word, the saw,

As if to prove saws knew what supper meant, 15

Leaped out at the boy’s hand, or seemed to leap—

He must have given the hand. However it was,

Neither refused the meeting. But the hand!

The boy’s first outcry was a rueful laugh,

As he swung toward them holding up the hand 20

Half in appeal, but half as if to keep

The life from spilling. Then the boy saw all—

Since he was old enough to know, big boy

Doing a man’s work, though a child at heart—

He saw all spoiled. ‘Don’t let him cut my hand off—

The doctor, when he comes. Don’t let him, sister!’

So. But the hand was gone already.

The doctor put him in the dark of ether.

He lay and puffed his lips out with his breath.

And then—the watcher at his pulse took fright.

No one believed. They listened at his heart.

Little—less—nothing!—and that ended it.

No more to build on there. And they, since they

Were not the one dead, turned to their affairs.

Comment: Predatory as humans are, they seem to become automatons that hardly have any feeling and only know to work. This is exactly what the poem is about. It shows how insensitive people are to others, even their family and their friends. Though the setting of the poem is put in a woody place and seems not to be technologically advanced much, its underlying theme subtly betrays what people in modern society are doing. They become colder and make themselves automatons that are pre-installed to know how to do exact things without ever thinking deeply and feeling as human beings. They appear to have lost their ability of expressing their emotions and fast-paced lifestyle, monetary issue and other social problems indirectly belittle the importance of societal relationships, of blood bonds and of mutual understandings.

Source: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/53087/out-out




Suicide's Note

by Langston Hughes

The calm,

Cool face of the river

Asked me for a kiss.

Comment: The conciseness impressed me at the first time I read this poem. Brief as it is, it enables the readers to make use of their imagination and make their own interpretations. Indeed, “Suicide’s note” is so condense that when someone happens to read this, he or she is highly likely to be amazed at its ability of evoking human imagination only with a few words. It shortly recounts a story of a woman who commits suicide and seems to have a strange hallucination in which she considers the river as her lover and the river appears to be “calm”, “cool”, and serene as a polished gentleman. This hallucination possibly reveals the reason why the woman wants to end her life. Under her eyes, the river, who is actually representative of Death - the one that everybody wants to steer clear of, is so serene and attractive. This contrast might be inferred that the woman has gone through some sorts of traumatic events and life seems so cruel and bitter to her that death is the only way to free her soul.

Source: https://genius.com/Langston-hughes-suicides-note-annotated

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